This is a mock up of my article for my music magazine.
I have now realized what i need to do to improve the article and make it as good as possible.
I need a catchy headline maybe a pun using the word curiosity.
I also need to stick to one type of interview. I start this article as an indirect interview but then it turns into a direct one later on. I need to be careful with my punctuation and spelling to make sure its all correct.

Do you also want to get the second side of this scanned and added? Then you need to get on with the redrafting!
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